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Love is RED by =Eternal-S:iconEternal-S:

Categories Manga/Anime > Digital Media > Drawings

©2009 =Eternal-S
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An original artwork for Japan Expo C= available in posters , wait for the update on my journal ^^


My OCs Lirya


hehe Hope u like it <3

Critique please C= ( don't be shy , I won't bite you ;DD )

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~HeavenlyNight Jun 25, 2009, 1:19:14 PM
...OMG.
THE COLOURS, THE DRAWING ITSELF.
So beautiful ;~;
:love:
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*femketje Jun 25, 2009, 1:19:16 PM
pretty

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*kokonattsu-n-cream Jun 25, 2009, 1:19:25 PM
Pretty! I like it! :heart:

The only thing that I can think to critique is the pose. I love the color white for the dress because it makes it seem more serene, but the pose makes it seem entirely too calm for the background... Also. This is a very small thing, but the boobs are different sizes. The one on her left is rounder and bigger than the other. It's not really that noticeable though. Anyway, it's still an amazing piece! :heart:

I hope what I said was actually helpful :hug: Great work!! lol :D

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"My beloved, It's not "I could die for you" but rather I've decided "I'll live for you." Even if we were to be born again, because I would be this me, And you will be that you. And I will say this again, always, always."
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~lucismundis Jun 25, 2009, 1:21:32 PM
Very cool. :D
Um, I'm probably not qualified to say this, but I'm not too sure about the background. the field and sky don't quite fit together, almost as if they were separate landscapes. Not sure if I'm making sense, also maybe you could make the shadows in the field a little darker? You know, add some contrast.

But don't get me wrong, I totally love it. :heart: Her hair is gorgeous.

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My inner geek just squeed.
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~AnnyKi Jun 25, 2009, 1:22:08 PM
Wow, it's so beautiful! with the read and white, ar eally beautiful combination :D
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~whisingbloomer Jun 25, 2009, 1:22:11 PM
no, love is green =p
i love- i mean, RED this!! 8D
amazing work, especially love(red) how you did the far view of the meadow.

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May every step taken along a journey be seasoned with determination and hope for the travel to become all the more worthwhile.
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~chappi-32 Jun 25, 2009, 1:25:31 PM
it's gorgeous! i luv it ^_^
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=NekoIce Jun 25, 2009, 1:32:35 PM
Wow.
J'aime particulièrement le background, indeed. =A= !!!!

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~StrawberryQuincy Jun 25, 2009, 1:40:18 PM
I don't have a subby, so i'll critique through a comment.

I love the backgroung especially the subtle black figure against the sky.
However, i feel that for this pose, her eyes should be open, maybe the glowing petal would be a good spot for her to be looking. I also feel that if you want her eyes closed, turn her head more forward, and maybe tilted downward a bit, so that it doesn't look like she should be looking at something specific behind her.

Other that that, i think it looks great, the anatomy looks good,and the hair is beautiful and flowing, but maybe add a slight shadow on the flower she's holding.

Hope that helps! :heart:

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